<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
<!DOCTYPE article PUBLIC "-//NLM//DTD Journal Publishing DTD v2.0 20040830//EN" "http://dtd.nlm.nih.gov/publishing/2.0/journalpublishing.dtd">
<article article-type="article-commentary" dtd-version="2.0" xmlns:xlink="http://www.w3.org/1999/xlink">
  <front>
    <journal-meta>
      <journal-id journal-id-type="publisher-id">JMIRxMed</journal-id>
      <journal-id journal-id-type="nlm-ta">JMIRx Med</journal-id>
      <journal-title>JMIRx Med</journal-title>
      <issn pub-type="epub">2563-6316</issn>
      <publisher>
        <publisher-name>JMIR Publications</publisher-name>
        <publisher-loc>Toronto, Canada</publisher-loc>
      </publisher>
    </journal-meta>
    <article-meta>
      <article-id pub-id-type="publisher-id">v2i4e33932</article-id>
      <article-id pub-id-type="pmid">27650664</article-id>
      <article-id pub-id-type="doi">10.2196/33932</article-id>
      <article-categories>
        <subj-group subj-group-type="heading">
          <subject>Peer-Review Report</subject>
        </subj-group>
        <subj-group subj-group-type="article-type">
          <subject>Peer-Review Report</subject>
        </subj-group>
      </article-categories>
      <title-group>
        <article-title>Peer Review of “A Local Community-Based Social Network for Mental Health and Well-being (Quokka): Exploratory Feasibility Study”</article-title>
      </title-group>
      <contrib-group>
        <contrib contrib-type="editor">
          <name>
            <surname>Meinert</surname>
            <given-names>Edward</given-names>
          </name>
        </contrib>
      </contrib-group>
      <contrib-group>
        <contrib id="contrib1" contrib-type="author" corresp="no">
          <collab>Anonymous</collab>
        </contrib>
      </contrib-group>
      <pub-date pub-type="collection">
        <season>Oct-Dec</season>
        <year>2021</year>
      </pub-date>
      <pub-date pub-type="epub">
        <day>27</day>
        <month>10</month>
        <year>2021</year>
      </pub-date>
      <volume>2</volume>
      <issue>4</issue>
      <elocation-id>e33932</elocation-id>
      <history>
        <date date-type="received">
          <day>29</day>
          <month>9</month>
          <year>2021</year>
        </date>
        <date date-type="accepted">
          <day>29</day>
          <month>9</month>
          <year>2021</year>
        </date>
      </history>
      <copyright-statement>© Anonymous. Originally published in JMIRx Med (https://med.jmirx.org), 27.10.2021.</copyright-statement>
      <copyright-year>2021</copyright-year>
      <license license-type="open-access" xlink:href="https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/">
        <p>This is an open-access article distributed under the terms of the Creative Commons Attribution License (https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/), which permits unrestricted use, distribution, and reproduction in any medium, provided the original work, first published in JMIRx Med, is properly cited. The complete bibliographic information, a link to the original publication on https://med.jmirx.org/, as well as this copyright and license information must be included.</p>
      </license>
      <self-uri xlink:href="https://med.jmirx.org/2021/4/e33932" xlink:type="simple"/>
      <related-article related-article-type="companion" id="preprint24972" ext-link-type="doi" xlink:href="https://doi.org/10.2196/preprints.24972" vol="2" page="e24972" xlink:title="Preprint:" xlink:type="simple">https://preprints.jmir.org/preprint/24972</related-article>
      <related-article related-article-type="companion" id="v2i4e33199" ext-link-type="doi" xlink:href="10.2196/33199" vol="2" page="e33199" xlink:title="Authors' Response to Peer-Review Reports:" xlink:type="simple">https://med.jmirx.org/2021/4/e33199/</related-article>
      <related-article related-article-type="companion" id="v2i4e24972" ext-link-type="doi" xlink:href="10.2196/24972" vol="2" page="e24972" xlink:title="Published Article:" xlink:type="simple">https://med.jmirx.org/2021/4/e24972/</related-article>
      <kwd-group>
        <kwd>local social network</kwd>
        <kwd>community health</kwd>
        <kwd>well-being</kwd>
        <kwd>digital health</kwd>
        <kwd>consumer health</kwd>
      </kwd-group>
    </article-meta>
  </front>
  <body>
    <p>
      <italic>This is a peer-review report submitted for the paper “A Local Community-Based Social Network for Mental Health and Well-being (Quokka): Exploratory Feasibility Study.”</italic>
    </p>
    <sec>
      <title>Round 1 Review</title>
      <sec>
        <title>General Comments</title>
        <p>I appreciate the opportunity to review this manuscript [<xref ref-type="bibr" rid="ref1">1</xref>]. I hope that my feedback will help to strengthen the paper.</p>
        <p>This paper has a strong theoretical background and empirical data. Overall, the manuscript is well prepared; however, it requires some major and minor corrections.</p>
      </sec>
      <sec>
        <title>Specific Comments</title>
        <sec>
          <title>Major Comments</title>
          <p>1. The value of this work seems to be significant.</p>
          <p>2. The <italic>Results</italic> section should start with a data analysis. If Table 1 and “User Statistics” represent a sample, then the appropriate subheading should be provided.</p>
          <p>3. In the <italic>Discussion</italic>, start your discussion with a short summary of what the main finding(s) of this study was/were. This section is too structured but at same time is confusing about the criteria of discussing the findings. I would suggest restructuring the way the data is discussed.</p>
          <p>4. The subheadings in the <italic>Methods</italic> section should be related to the subheadings in the <italic>Results</italic> section.</p>
        </sec>
        <sec>
          <title>Minor Comments</title>
          <p>1. Minor technical/language corrections are needed (eg, “There is a strong, well-researched connection between social influence, social media, and health and wellness [2-3]”; “Try 3 different types of exercise this week”).</p>
          <p>2. Double-check the style of the references, which should be prepared according to journal requirements (eg, references 22, 23, 28).</p>
        </sec>
      </sec>
    </sec>
  </body>
  <back>
    <app-group/>
    <fn-group>
      <fn fn-type="conflict">
        <p>None declared.</p>
      </fn>
    </fn-group>
    <ref-list>
      <ref id="ref1">
        <label>1</label>
        <nlm-citation citation-type="journal">
          <person-group person-group-type="author">
            <name name-style="western">
              <surname>Shih</surname>
              <given-names>C</given-names>
            </name>
            <name name-style="western">
              <surname>Pudipeddi</surname>
              <given-names>R</given-names>
            </name>
            <name name-style="western">
              <surname>Uthayakumar</surname>
              <given-names>A</given-names>
            </name>
            <name name-style="western">
              <surname>Washington</surname>
              <given-names>P</given-names>
            </name>
          </person-group>
          <article-title>A local community-based social network for mental health and well-being (Quokka): exploratory feasibility study</article-title>
          <source>JMIRx Med</source>
          <year>2021</year>
          <volume>2</volume>
          <issue>4</issue>
          <fpage>e24972</fpage>
          <comment>
            <ext-link ext-link-type="uri" xlink:type="simple" xlink:href="https://med.jmirx.org/2021/4/e24972/"/>
          </comment>
          <pub-id pub-id-type="doi">10.2196/24972</pub-id>
        </nlm-citation>
      </ref>
    </ref-list>
  </back>
</article>
